Eddie’s Rims

By Selena R., 4th Grade, Columbia Explorers Academy
That's Weird, Grandma

Once upon a time there was a man named Eddie he sold nice rims for cars but a man told him the rims are not fixed they broke off my car and Eddie said I fixed them every night and day you must be overreacting and the man said fine I will take the rims back and I will try it again and if it breaks you are in big trouble so he took it and it did not break so Eddie was right I was overreacting I have to go back and tell him so he ran back and told him he was sorry I was overreacting her you go your 1,800 dollars for the rims thank you have a nice day you too the man said and Eddie told his wife we can now go to Florida and see Mickey and Donald and all of the other guys and we can swim in the pool.