Bad Car returns.

Posted by Molly on May 20, 2012

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Another classic returns to the stage:
BAD CAR by Freddy, 4th grade Chalmers Elementary
Turned in to a song by Jonathan Mastro.

The car turned upside down and it flipped over to the side that had the suitcase in it. how did it flip over. because it was driving fast and it flipped over and i hope it won’t flip and blow up and people was looking at the car when it flipped over to the other when the people saw it and it had a song with it too. it called is a song that flipped over to the other side

and the people was sad because the car flipped over and they was looking at it and baby was crying and I was sad because the car flipped over and that was a good good very very good and pretty and i like that car and everybody else liked that car too. James liked that car too. Freddie liked that car and Sidney liked that car too and Elijah liked that car too and Jamal liked that car too and Patrick liked that car too Brandi liked that car too and everybody and I liked it too

and when the car flipped over I was not happy and when the car flipped over everybody I mean everybody was sad when the car flipped over

and I talked to people was in the car because they was driving fast too and the car flipped over because they was driving too fast and the people was sad because they was driving too fast and the policeman came and the firefighters came too everybody came too class was happy and I was the only me Freddie and Sidney and James was the only ones sad when the care flipped over when the people was in it too and I was very very very sad and I cried too because the car flipped over to the other side too and I was very unhappy when the car flipped over to the other side too and everyone was very

and a song too here it go [music notes] The end of Freddie’s story.

Say “the people were sad.” at the box office for a discounted ticket.

3 Comments

I LOVE YOU BARREL OF MONKEYS WE PLAY START THE SHOW AT HOME POSHA AND MS JOHNSON LIFT ITS SO SAD. I JUSS WANTED TO SAY HEY.TXT ME BACK I LOVE MARIA BRANDON JEFF AND ERIC AND MALA

rickiya May 25, 2012 at 06:06 PM

Rickya!

Its sooooooo great to hear you still play Start the Show! I really miss being at Morton and hope that you and your class is doing well as the summer nears. I keep laughing thinking about your Vampire story.Plus your poem at the Poetry Cafe was awesome. Us Monkeys, especially me, would love for you to send us some more of your poems and stories!

-Brandon!

Brandon May 25, 2012 at 11:35 PM

Rickiya!  Thanks so much for posting on the website.  You and your classmates were amazing to be around and your stories were super.  I hope you and your family are able to come to Celebration of Authors.  Thank you for your great stories and keep writing!

Jeff May 25, 2012 at 11:47 PM

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